Seeking Honest Feedback on My First Photo Book

Hi all,

I recently put together my first photo book called In Passing. It’s a black-and-white street photography project built around quiet everyday moments and portraits of people around the city.

When I started shooting, I didn’t really have a strict concept I just wanted to go out, observe, shoot, and turn that experience into one photo book. During editing and layout, it slowly became more of an abstract visual story.

This was also my way of exploring editorial design, so I wanted to present it as a full photo book/deck rather than just a photography project. Since I’m still learning and don’t know much about editorial design, I’d genuinely appreciate honest feedback be brutal pls. Does it feel unique, or did I overdo parts of it? I’d love thoughts on the layout, pacing, storytelling, hierarchy, typography, and what I could improve overall.

👉https://www.behance.net/gallery/249932311/Photobook-In-Passing